【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% f4 _7 Z  i  M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: f; p/ L7 Q. V4 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 Y7 |$ ~& B0 G  CWith the moon kissing it every night
/ v; }$ P7 k( ?$ \9 q" P; I. MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ]' l4 R3 t1 JYou needn’t fear anything
) _0 n6 z+ c0 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' I3 q" q# t9 _; o; V  dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; @! S3 l2 s* W3 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 Z$ H5 c* f/ [' `$ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' U( n& p9 X( h  L- zWith such a tongue as yours,
# Q* J7 ?, Q2 n" Y5 ]* PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 K* Y1 y% G: V! q. ~, s: w: [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% r' v/ N. |/ K% W  t$ ~% Q1 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' R( G/ Y, j$ {0 @$ [* L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 z7 O1 n' h* t* \. c. K' T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 H. v+ s! }: g  f! q% p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 |0 K. w$ E$ v" x: U1 D6 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& n- a8 m2 e+ ]/ A4 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 I, ]4 q1 ?9 B- g2 ~( k, Z0 ~9 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 O) f6 X( D2 D' R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, b, x4 ^* L5 R' j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) }, z* v& |; l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ s& }. S( S8 S  R- V5 F4 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 }' E; |* _3 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- @! F7 ]4 [% C. B9 h6 t( N5 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- @/ w6 [. C+ M2 B) Q9 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ I! _/ k! o) E7 H/ ~. g0 L/ c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* H3 s& ]( [3 L" K7 X5 ?6 |( B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- K, V  n6 j3 S% y( o$ U: {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 U: ~& X% _: ~% `! e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% m  V2 z% G8 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! q" [2 j( ~7 w* p& t& z7 z' G) w# b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 ^% ^6 Q" O0 S4 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# S" V4 l1 S8 A& ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" s& r; k0 D6 P  l. P7 f2 x1 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 Q# x/ s! m. I( t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 N( k* E: k" y0 g! n) i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& p3 A6 |! I5 C/ r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# t/ D2 o5 J+ y3 Q  V. g: q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& }# {# p3 g& L' o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; B9 B4 E' K% ?: G- H/ w" s# }! T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>